Critique my New Site?

Discussion in 'HTML' started by jstfrths, Jan 11, 2007.

  1. jstfrths

    jstfrths Guest

    Hi Folks,
    I've put together a little website at
    www.intellectual-playground.com that doesn't look very good - in my
    opinion. I'd like suggestions as to how I coudl make it look better.
    Thanks very much!
    - Jeff
     
    jstfrths, Jan 11, 2007
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  2. jstfrths

    dorayme Guest

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    "jstfrths" <> wrote:

    > Hi Folks,
    > I've put together a little website at
    > www.intellectual-playground.com that doesn't look very good - in my
    > opinion. I'd like suggestions as to how I coudl make it look better.
    > Thanks very much!
    > - Jeff


    Never mind the look for now here on alt.html, I will give you a
    tip, others might give you others, all the tips will add up to
    make it better. Here is mine:

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    dorayme
     
    dorayme, Jan 11, 2007
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