Website evaluation

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Crystal Nites Virtual Mall

Hello to everyone and thanks for creating a group where affiliate
novice, such as myself, can come for assistance. I was wondering if
you could review my website to see if I am headed in the right
direction. I endeavor to create a functional virtual mall where my
customer base can come and find the stores that would find at there
local mall. You can view my work in progress at http://Crystal-Nites.com.

Any suggestion or advice would be very much appreciate. I am a college
student striving to achieve a master in business and this is my first
attempt a business.
 
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Travis Newbury

Hello to everyone and thanks for creating a group where affiliate
novice, such as myself, can come for assistance.

Yea, don't thank us quite yet...
I was wondering if
you could review my website to see if I am headed in the right
direction. I endeavor to create a functional virtual mall where my
customer base can come and find the stores that would find at there
local mall. You can view my work in progress athttp://Crystal-Nites.com.

Turn off the music. If I want to listen to your music I will turn it
on thank you.

Good job with the expanding header.

Why change the entire structure of the page when go to the baby
department?

Lose the freaking frames.
 
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Chris F.A. Johnson

Hello to everyone and thanks for creating a group where affiliate
novice, such as myself, can come for assistance. I was wondering if
you could review my website to see if I am headed in the right
direction. I endeavor to create a functional virtual mall where my
customer base can come and find the stores that would find at there
local mall. You can view my work in progress at http://Crystal-Nites.com.

Any suggestion or advice would be very much appreciate. I am a college
student striving to achieve a master in business and this is my first
attempt a business.

The layout falls apart in a narrow window:
<http://cfaj.freeshell.org/testing/CrystalNites.jpg>

Centered text is hard to read.
 
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Ari Heino

Any suggestion or advice would be very much appreciate.

Try validating.
Get rid of proprietary and other oldish html markup.
Resize the images' dimensions proportionally, if you must resize them.
They look bad.
 
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Raymond SCHMIT

Hello to everyone and thanks for creating a group where affiliate
novice, such as myself, can come for assistance. I was wondering if
you could review my website to see if I am headed in the right
direction. I endeavor to create a functional virtual mall where my
customer base can come and find the stores that would find at there
local mall. You can view my work in progress at http://Crystal-Nites.com.

Any suggestion or advice would be very much appreciate. I am a college
student striving to achieve a master in business and this is my first
attempt a business

IMHO,
1. It appear that you forgot to create the "Welcome Screen" in the
menu above the "Baby Department"
2. The layout of the page must be always the same for each menu
choiced/clicked
"Welcome Screen" and "Baby Department" shows different layout .... we
feel jumped on another site :)
 
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Neredbojias

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Have you given thought to the political implications of the name,
"Crystal-Nites?" Not criticizing, but I think this might bother some
potential customers. Then again, maybe not. Just worth considering,
however.

Well, it might be worse. He could have used "Crystal Meth"...
 

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