critique wanted

Mike · Feb 10, 2006

Hi, all:

Please take a look at http://textfairy.com/

I would like input about the navigation, if you know what this is for when
you first see it, if it sells itself, if you know what to do once on the
site.. things like that.

All comments welcome. I'm just trying to see if there are any obvious things
I've missed before making it live.

Thanx in Advance

Blinky the Shark · Feb 10, 2006

Please take a look at http://textfairy.com/

All comments welcome. I'm just trying to see if there are any obvious things
I've missed before making it live.

1. The name made me think of Truman Capote.

2. It doesn't resize.

3. http://blinkynet.net/stuff/comp/textfairy.jpg

Leonard Blaisdell · Feb 10, 2006

Mike said:
Hi, all:

Please take a look at http://textfairy.com/

I would like input about the navigation, if you know what this is for when
you first see it, if it sells itself, if you know what to do once on the
site.. things like that.

I find the faint brown text on white extremely difficult to read. There
is a disembodied short golden vertical bar three quarters of the way
through the text block that appears to start with ParkingSquad.com which
I see in Safari. It is the only vertical golden bar I see. I went far
enough to view your source. I'll let others comment on that including
validation if they wish.
<may be a better venue
for pure site aesthetics. You'll get ripped for your HTML, CSS,
Javascript and everything else here.

leo

Neredbojias · Feb 11, 2006

With neither quill nor qualm, Mike quothed:

Hi, all:

Please take a look at http://textfairy.com/

I would like input about the navigation, if you know what this is for when
you first see it, if it sells itself, if you know what to do once on the
site.. things like that.

All comments welcome. I'm just trying to see if there are any obvious things
I've missed before making it live.

To be honest, it didn't look very good in any of the browsers I viewed
it in.

I didn't check the markup but suspect errors and lackings therein.

My advice is that you need to spend more time on it, possibly comparing
your results to other web pages that appeal to you.

Roy Schestowitz · Feb 11, 2006

__/ [Mike] on Saturday 11 February 2006 01:40 \__

Hi, all:

Please take a look at http://textfairy.com/

I would like input about the navigation, if you know what this is for when
you first see it, if it sells itself, if you know what to do once on the
site.. things like that.

All comments welcome. I'm just trying to see if there are any obvious
things I've missed before making it live.

Thanx in Advance

http://www.webhero.org/Newsgroups/crossposting.htm

Read it and internalise, please.

Best wishes,

Roy

dorayme · Feb 11, 2006

Mike said:
Hi, all:

Please take a look at http://textfairy.com/

I would like input about the navigation, if you know what this is for when
you first see it, if it sells itself, if you know what to do once on the
site.. things like that.

All comments welcome. I'm just trying to see if there are any obvious things
I've missed before making it live.

Apart from too wide for many resolutions, requiring horizontal
scrolling, (no one likes this), there are more mistakes and poor
practice in the css and html than you can poke a stick at,
starting with no doctype declaration in the html. Put one in,
try:

<!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.01//EN"
"http://www.w3.org/TR/html4/strict.dtd">

and try to validate your html and css and look at all the
warnings and comments. In css you give no units

Did you write this or generate it with something?

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