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Arved Sandstrom said:On Mon, 20 Jun 2011, Arved Sandstrom wrote:
On 11-06-20 04:19 PM, (e-mail address removed) wrote:
[ SNIP ]
The best measure of this detailed design document that I
produced is that, in marked contrast to the usual design docs
that floated around that office, the higher up the food chain
you went with it, the less people were able to understand it.
"Less" or "fewer"? (You probably do mean "less", but the
widespread practice of using the former to mean the latter means
that one can't really be sure, maybe.)
I did mean less, but by definition you also would have had fewer
people able to understand it.
This less/fewer thing is largely dubious:
http://english.stackexchange.com/questions/495/less-vs-fewer/505#505
I don't think it's defensible to say that Arved's sentence was
incorrect. Lots of people might not write it that way, but lots
would, and everyone understands it.
Just for the record, I don't think I meant to claim that there
was anything wrong with Arved's sentence, even to those pedantic
prescriptivists who disapprove of using "less" where "fewer" would
work. I think there might be a subtle distinction between fewer
people who understand, and people in general understanding less,
but -- maybe not.
Agreed.
I don't think that really works -- "the higher up" seems to me to
want a parallel "the" before whatever follows the comma.
I read "less" as an adverb modifying "able", moved to enhance
parallelism: "The higher ... the less able ..."
I think you may be making the same point here I was getting at just
above ....