Le 12/8/08 1:38 PM, RobG a écrit :
"written March to July 2007,"
"last modified on February 9th 2008."
The fact that the page has been modified since it was first published
doesn't mean it's been reviewed or even significantly altered.
and you have a link to mail to the author.
Where is the link to the comments and reviews that have already been
received? If I submit a review or comment, where is the commitment to
make it public or respond to it?
A review of a technical article infers a critique by one or more
independent authorities on its subject. Specific criticisms should be
addressed either by modifying the text or explaining why the author's
opinion differs from that of the reviewer or reviewers.
Providing a contact e-mail address hasn't fixed the many errors of
fact in the document. It is clearly a less than optimal alternative
to a formal review if the article has been on the web for 10 months
and still contains basic errors. For example, the section on HTML
refers to tags when it should refer to elements, and:
"...the [DOM] tree contains two types of elements: Tags ... and pieces
of simple text. The pieces of text, as we will see, work somewhat
different than the other elements."
If the author had explained the DOM as consisting of nodes, then it
would have been easier to explain the above using the different node
types. At the same time, the reader would have been introduced to
correct terminology and concepts without being told a text node is an
element. Further, the DOM provides an interface to determine the
NodeType so readers are a lot better off to have learned about nodes
and node types from the start, not "tags" or "text elements".
It is also extremely important that beginners are taught appropriate
terminology from the very beginning so that when they ask questions,
they make some kind of sense to persons other than those familiar with
the source of their learning.